Song Phrasing

  • September 8, 2010 2:35 AM PDT
    yes it does ma'am.
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    September 8, 2010 4:40 AM PDT
    There are places I remember
    All my life though some have changed
    Some forever not for better
    Some have gone and some remain
    All these places have their moments
    With lovers and friends I still can recall
    Some are dead and some are living
    In my life I've loved them all

    But of all these friends and lovers
    There is no one compares with you
    And these memories lose their meaning
    When I think of love as something new
    Though I know I'll never lose affection
    For people and things that went before
    I know I'll often stop and think about them
    In my life I love you more

    Though I know I'll never lose affection
    For people and things that went before
    I know I'll often stop and think about them
    In my life I love you more
    In my life I love you more
  • September 8, 2010 5:46 AM PDT
    I usually keep these things in the family, but I'm feeling some love here...lol...so here's one I wrote.

    Everything is Right Key of A Tempo: 84BPM :Copyright 2008 James Barnhart

    Sittin here on a Sunday afternoon,
    The rain is on the window pane.
    Takes me back to evenings at my grandma’s house,
    Catchin’ night crawlers in the rain.
    You had to grab ‘em quick before they saw your light,
    Crawlin round with ole’ Ed Brown,
    My jeans were a muddy sight.

    Sittin down by the river on the boat ramp,
    A coal barge is chuggin by,
    ’72 GMC with the tailgate down,
    a YooHoo and an oatmeal pie.
    The morning sun was lightin up that Flatwoods riverbank,
    And me and Dad were skippin rocks and guessin how far they had sank.

    Just a couple times that I recall when everything was right,
    Way back when we were all still here, and everything was right.

    Standing tall as the Captain read those words,
    Old Glory in the morning sun.
    Fifty years after my Grandpa served,
    I could feel him as that Medal was hung.
    Granny said the Master’s brush paints all that is this place,
    And from my flying machine I can see His amazing grace.

    Yeah there are times that I recall, when everything felt right,
    Some good times that I remember, when everything seemed right

    (Instrumental)

    Sittin’ here watchin’ my children play,
    They’re runnin’ all around this place,
    My wife looks over and catches my eye,
    A smile spreads across my face.
    Everything before now just dims and fades away,
    And in my heart I know that I can finally say,

    No matter what happens now, I know I got it right
    No matter what I accomplish now, I already got it right.

    (Instrumental)

    Now we're all here again, and everything is right.
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    September 8, 2010 12:43 PM PDT
    There is unrest in the forest
    There is trouble with the trees
    For the maples want more sunlight
    And the oaks ignore their pleas

    The trouble with the maples
    (And they're quite convinced they're right)
    They say the oaks are just too lofty
    And they grab up all the light
    But the oaks can't help their feelings
    If they like the way they're made
    And they wonder why the maples
    Can't be happy in their shade

    There is trouble in the forest
    And the creatures all have fled
    As the maples scream 'Oppression!'
    And the oaks just shake their heads

    So the maples formed a union
    And demanded equal rights
    'The oaks are just too greedy
    We will make them give us light'
    Now there's no more oak oppression
    For they passed a noble law
    And the trees are all kept equal
    By hatchet, axe and saw

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    September 8, 2010 1:44 PM PDT
    Defcon, so good with the words...

    Sittin down by the river on the boat ramp,
    A coal barge is chuggin by,
    ’72 GMC with the tailgate down,
    a YooHoo and an oatmeal pie.

    So cool, I love YooHoo and oatmeal pie!!!!!!!!!
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    September 9, 2010 12:46 AM PDT
      Wish we could go back
  • September 9, 2010 2:13 AM PDT
    I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
    Watch you smile while you are sleeping
    Far away and dreaming
    I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
    I could stay lost in this moment forever
    Well, every moment spent with you
    Is a moment I treasure


    I don't wanna close my eyes
    I don't wanna fall asleep
    'Cause I'd miss you, babe
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    'Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream will never do
    I'd still miss you, babe
    And I don't wanna miss a thing

    Lying close to you
    Feeling your heart beating
    And I'm wondering what you're dreaming
    Wondering if it's me you're seeing
    Then I kiss your eyes and thank God we're together
    And I just wanna stay with you
    In this moment forever, forever and ever
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    September 9, 2010 4:05 AM PDT
    It's all the same
    Only the names will change
    Everyday
    It seems we're wastin' away

    Another place
    Where the faces are so cold
    I drive all night
    Just to get back home

    I'm a cowboy
    On a steel horse I ride
    I'm wanted
    Dead or alive
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    September 9, 2010 7:05 AM PDT
    Mike - you come up with some great topics! There's so many - here's a few of mine in no particular order:
    1. Imagine - John Lennon - makes me cry every time
    2. Maybe I'm Amazed - Paul McCartney - always brings thoughts of my husband and the trials and tribulations we've faced over the last 22 years and we're still here and stronger then ever
    3. Chevy Van - Sammy Johns - this one's probably pretty obvious.....
    4. Shooting Star - Bad Co. - friends that have ended their lives
    5. Numerous Seger songs - probably no explanation needed there
    6. Sitting at a Red Light and Lie to Me - Johnny Lang (worth checking out if you like blues and haven't heard him)
    7. Unwritten - Natasha Bedingfield - heard this song for the first time not too long after I got sober:

    I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined
    I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned
    Staring at the blank page before you
    Open up the dirty window
    Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find

    Reaching for something in the distance
    So close you can almost taste it
    Release your inhibitions
    Feel the rain on your skin
    No one else can do it for you
    Only you can let it in
    No one else, no one else
    Can speak the words on your lips
    Drench yourself in words unspoken
    Live your life with arms wide open
    Today is where your book begins
    The rest is still unwritten
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    September 9, 2010 10:40 AM PDT

    Youse Guys......

    Youse Guys......


    Youse Guys are simply ...

    AMAZING!


     Thanks again all, I merely offered all a place to express what they feel. I really liked all that were posted and I will further say I did expect to see so many great words, given the wide gamut of deep and free thinking people here.


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    September 9, 2010 11:40 AM PDT
    IT'S YOUNZ NOT YOUSE


    AND WE DRINK POP NO SODA HERE